Great writing is not just found in novels, poetry, and screenwriting. It’s in all forms of communication like speeches and blog posts. Great writing is about getting your message vividly across – telling a story by painting a memorable picture in words. It’s captivating your audience so they expand that message in their mind and it sticks in like Macky’s knife.
Great writers use many devices. Descriptors. Metaphors and similes. Dialogue – sometimes with patois. Suggestion and innuendo. Beats. Pacing. Rhythm. Foreshadowing, shock, and tension building.
I don’t know squat about songwriting, let alone music composition. I can barely play the radio, never mind making something intelligent come out of an instrument.
But I’m okay at writing and I can recognize great writing.
Last night I started humming the tune from Mack The Knife. I’m not sure what started it, but the dammed thing wouldn’t go away and I realized I knew few of the words. I had a limited understanding of the song – just that it was about some bad-ass with a blade and a good tune. I thought Frank Sinatra originally did it and was recently copied by Michael Buble.
So I Googled it and, yes, both Sinatra and Buble sang it and so did Bobby Darin. A lot of other great singers did, too. Louis Armstrong. Bing Crosby. Ella Fizgerald and Peggy Lee. Of course Tony Bennett. And Liberace. Did you know Bill Haley & The Comets cut it? Roger Daltry and The Doors? Sting blew it away.
Simon Cowell was quoted calling it “The greatest song ever written“.
What’s so great about it? Who wrote this masterpiece? Here’s what Wikepedia says:
“Mack the Knife” or “The Ballad of Mack the Knife”, originally “Die Moritat von Mackie Messer”, is a song composed by Kurt Weill with lyrics by Bertolt Brecht for their music drama Die Dreigroschenoper, or, as it is known in English, The Threepenny Opera. It premiered in Berlin in 1928 at the Theater am Schiffbauerdamm. The song has become a popular standard recorded by many artists, including a US number one hit for Bobby Darin.
I played Bobby Darin’s version about ten times and followed the words, trying to analyze the greatness in this writing – in this story. It’s there. It’s there in every word. Every line. Every paragraph. Descriptors. Metaphors and similes. Dialogue – sometimes with patois. Suggestion and innuendo. Beats. Pacing. Rhythm. Foreshadowing, shock, and tension building.
By God, this is great writing.
Copy this link https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SEllHMWkXEU and paste it in another window to listen to Bobby Darin’s crooning while following the lyrics. Put on your headphones and enjoy a read/listen to some great storytelling.
That was a great read, Garry. I enjoy reading your posts.
I’m only 26 and that is one of favorite songs. When I first heard the song I didn’t realize how serious the lyrics were and after I looked into its history and lyrics, I was amazed by the song’s depth. The amount of tension in Mack the Knife has inspired my writing.
Well this is a so nice to hear comment, Zach. You know when a song is covered by so many greats, it’s good. Best inspiration wishes for your writing from me 🙂
I had no idea of the story behind the tune. It IS a great story. Every word matters and pushes the story forward. A great lesson for all is right!
Hi Sue! Your bang-on about everything pushing the story ahead. That’s a tough lesson when we writers want to go off on a sidetrack to explain or describe something that we like but doesn’t advance the story. (lowers head and pleads guilty)